Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Monday, October 3, 2016

Review: Edit Ruthlessly


In my opinion it is extremely easy to fall into the habit of using more words than needed just to try and hit a specific word count for the class. In retrospect, this probably does much more harm to our work than we think. As the old adage goes, "quality over quantity".

Doing away with unnecessary distractions is often a help.  Source: Online Course Announcements: October 2

Reading Notes: Ovid's Metamorphasis part A

The very first thing I noticed is that if one doesn't have a very solid basis on who each character is in Roman mythology, it is going to be very hard to stay with the stories. If the stories could be put in layman's terms for us non-8th century philosophers, I believe it would help quite a lot. Things get really intense really fast with the rape of Persephone. Persephone's mother is absolutely mad for much of the story. It seems that she's also a bit mad at her daughter for some reason, even though everything happened against her will. If I were writing a story based on this, I would probably still try and stay away from the romantic route, but also make the story a bit less harsh.

From Ovid's Metamorphoses, translated by Tony Kline (2000). Link to source
Persephone breaks her fast.  Source: Mythology and Folklore

Wikipedia Trails: From Heracleion to Gravity

Two-dimensional analogy of spacetime distortion generated by the mass of an object. Source: Wikipedia

I started off  looking up Heracleion because it was on the class Twitter page. From there, I saw what I originally thought was a wall. After reading the page I found out that it is generally a stone or wooden slab erected for commemorative or funerary purposes. They can be carved such as an obelisk, or even a plain slab. Another example is the Rosetta Stone, which many are familiar with. Next, I clicked on a link to the Tang Dynasty. The Tang dynasty was the major power in china during the 7th to 10th centuries, and many innovations and cultural influences came along during this period. Buddhism became more widely spread during this period. Last, but certainly not least, I came upon gravity. Of course I know a lot about it already, however I was curious to see what more I could learn from the page.

Sunday, October 2, 2016

A Deadly Trickster

The days had been darkening for quite some in the lands near Mordor. Some had attributed it to Mount Doom becoming increasingly agitated, seemingly on the brink of an eruption. Still others blamed the Deceiver, as every inn from the Blue Mountains to the Mirkwood held stories whispered with great care taken not to be overheard by the passing trader or shrouded Ranger. These whispers carried with them the chilling news of a dark entity rising in the far west. Everyone had noticed the shapes moving through the trees at night, or heard of the villages razed overnight with no survivors to relay a warning to the outside world.

 It was in these times that a creature older than the first men found a home in Torech Ungol, a winding, twisting cave in the pass of Cirith Ungol. The creature’s name was Anansi. He had eight wretched legs connected to an abdomen covered in silvery gray hair. Numerous eyes kept watch of everything that happened in the cave, and a pair of fangs longer than most daggers lay in wait to sink into the flesh of anyone who came into the lair.

The orcs in nearby Mordor often played a game. In the fashion befitting an orc, the game was less about fun than it was cruelty. As much as orcs love inflicting pain on others, they also relish the feeling of receiving it, mostly because it removes them from their piteous world for a split second. When the game started they would begin giving their opponent superficial cuts, taking great care to not slip and slice too deeply. This would continue until either one of the contestants lost consciousness from loss of blood. The loser would then have the wounds received cauterized and be taken to the steps of Torech Ungol. It was in Anansi's nature to be particularly greedy, oftentimes ensaring a bearer of the loser as well. The creature loved to play with its food, however, and a silky smooth voice emanated from somewhere in the dark mandible coaxing the orcs to play a game of life or death. Anansi promised that if at least one orc could find a way to the pool of water in the very center of his lair, both would be free to leave. He would also give his word that he would not attack the orcs until he had solved a riddle given to him by the orc. Now, most orcs were well known to be exceedingly dim-witted, but in this particular case the loser happened to be an older guard in the torture chamber, and he had heard one prisoner consoling himself time and time again with one riddle. It read:

I come like a thief in the night.
I take everything, but at the same time nothing.
You know me, and sometimes even welcome me at your bed.
I am at once a gateway and a wall.
What am I?


                Anansi had never gotten a riddle so eloquent from an orc. Often it was a nasty curse or a crude laugh he received. The orcs stumbled through the darkness for a good while as Anansi mulled the riddle over. The older orc heard the splash of a water droplet into a larger body and began heading towards it. Just as he reached the edge of the pool there he heard the clicking of fangs, and a whisper. Death.


Author's note: 
I love The Lord of the Rings, so whenever I got the chance to write about a spider I compared Anansi to Shelob, a large dangerous spider that guards a passageway into Mordor. For those who don't know, Mordor is the home of the main antagonist of the trilogy. Anansi is a spider from many West African folktales. He is a known trickster who regularly uses his smarts to get things that he wants from others. I tried to incorporate some of the cunning which Anansi shows in folktales such as Anansi and Nothing. In the story, he convinces a rich man that lives nearby that it would be fun to trade clothes while they go into town and find wives. Anansi tricks women into believing that he is the rich one while the other man struggles to find a suitable wife. Finally, they return to their respective homes with wives, and all is made clear. By adding a chilling characteristic in which Anansi plays with his food a la the riddle game, I incorporate some of Anansi into the cold-blooded killing machine of Shelob in the LoTR setting. I have included a link to the Wikipedia page for Shelob in case anyone reading is interested in learning more about her. She is one of the creepiest things the protagonists face in the books, and also one of my favorite parts of the movies. 

Partially inspired by Anansi and Nothing in West African Folktales by William H. Barker and Cecilia Sinclair.

Setting inspired by the book The Two Towers by J.R.R. Tolkein--Shelob



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The Two Towers        Source:Wikipedia

Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Reading Notes: Anasi and Nothing

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The One Ring  Source:Wikipedia

This week I read the short stories of the trickster spider Anansi from the West African Folktales. I am thinking of crossing the story of Anansi with that of Shelob, a very large and very frightening spider from one of my favorite trilogies, The Lord of the Rings. Anansi's tricks are relatively harmless when compared with the single-minded killer Shelob. However, I believe that it would not be all that hard to put a really dark twist on the folktales that would better reflect the enormous predator.


West African Folktales by Barker and Sinclair: Link to the reading online